Pitch & Feedback

This is the pitch for our idea on the recreation of Drake, Headlines music video. The following points were given as feedback on which we need to consider and improve on to hopefully make a better finished product.

Positive Ideas

• Good concept, not to difficult to produce
• Good use of generic conventions, items such as the caps, earphones etc.
• Good choice of character/s

Areas to improve on

• Try to discuss in more detail what is actually going to happen in the video. This description was to basic

• The locations appear to be quite vague at the moment, further discuss these to come to a conclusion
• Make sure that enough people are present when shooting the performance based scenes
• Make sure that the characters are chosen correctly, ethnicity is often key in these type of music videos so extras and other actors must fit within the generic conventions.

The actual production is much clearer in both mine and Hayley's heads, it is just the fact we were limited on time (1 minute) in the pitch to explain fully. We are also going to discuss the locations further to gain a clearer view on where we are going to film. Another aspect which we are going to consider is the other actors, we will thoroughly think about this so the video looks as professional as possible.