Slide 2 is too brief. Re-read it. Describe the performance aspects (where, why?) and the narrative (what is the story and in what order is it presented to us? why?).
Get more location shots and talk about the connotations of beaches, clubs, etc.
Camera shots - i want to see more (the ones you actually talk about). How it emphasises the surroundings but also the artist that's being promoted.
Editing - think about the cross dissolves and pacing and what they represent.
Themes? Iconography? Must consider these...
Currently mid Level 3 (low C). Need to be aiming for solid B at least.
Slide 2 is too brief. Re-read it. Describe the performance aspects (where, why?) and the narrative (what is the story and in what order is it presented to us? why?).
ReplyDeleteGet more location shots and talk about the connotations of beaches, clubs, etc.
Camera shots - i want to see more (the ones you actually talk about). How it emphasises the surroundings but also the artist that's being promoted.
Editing - think about the cross dissolves and pacing and what they represent.
Themes? Iconography? Must consider these...
Currently mid Level 3 (low C). Need to be aiming for solid B at least.